Here's a cool trick
Listen to this song, Squidhunting Manwhore, and Quest of the Manwhore in that order, it sounds like a complete song.
You Should add the lyrics
I bet it'd sound great with them.
A good addition
It woul've been cool if you added Sleet and Dingo into the mix, other then that, good job
The end part totally ruined it.
One Change I recomend
Adding Peter's Laugh. You know, "Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh-heh, and then ano-ther heh-heh-heh-heh-heh!" That'd probably help.
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